Restore the dwelling metaphor, pillar portraits, and threshold to Part I#462
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What
Restores three elements from the manual's original opening (the early
book/part1_soul/manuscript in git history) to the current Part I, rewritten so the aspiration rides on design-intent verbs rather than effect claims. Builds on the warmth revision merged in #461. Three files changed; no Phi, gloss, or IPA touched.The restorations
pi noas its daily face, and the fifth pillar reaching back past the factory clock. Each portrait is a preview; chapter 3 of Part II keeps the full explanations, and the glimpse avoids duplicating that chapter's whiplash-line description.What was not restored, deliberately
The original's determinism ("the architecture of Phi becomes the architecture of your thought," grammar "short-circuiting impulsive, reactive speech") stays in the archive; those claims are refused by canon and by the book's own science chapter. The old text's retired vocabulary (
phale,shilei,sutha,muila saule) stays retired; every restored image is carried by current words or by English prose alone. The waiver budget from #461 is unchanged: chapter 1 still states its one boundary once, and the new material spends no hedges at all, because portraits and questions need none.Checks and audit
Validator: 1,275 entries, 0 errors, 0 warnings; site build passes; dash, curly-quote, and banned-vocabulary scans clean. The Humanizer and batch pass caught and fixed: a "knows the way... knows the way" doubling in the dwelling paragraph, Right Speech's test stated as three terms where the protocol's own formulation has four (nonviolence restored), "standing behind it" echoing chapter 1's "standing in it," a "real now" colliding with the toy-becoming-real line two files earlier, and a rooms-then-path metaphor clash at the threshold, unified by making the walk pass through the rooms.